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Poetry: Holding up a man-tin - I'm drowning

By Will Dodds

Calm. Tranquil peace. But within a few seconds,

The-Splash
Waves

 

Calm. Tranquil peace.

But within a few seconds,

 

I looked behind me.

 

Screams from my friends and I clocked his death beckon.

 

He was drowning, waist deep,

 but slipping under the blue

Turning white as his face

 with an undercurrent looming

of a harrowing hue

from a birds-eye view

 

In that moment I crawled to him,

attacking the water that attacked.

And I remember diving and pushing his body aloft,

 

To keep his head above water,

he was gasping for air,

I looked out for help

but could see nobody there

apart from the white water and waves

washing over briefly

 and the slap of the next as quickly as they left.

 

The waves did not cease

 and while he was thrashing,

 I was trying to hold up

 a friend and a man-tin.

 

While trying to swim!

Myself now in peril.

Peril-gross-oh!

Now it’s dangerous for me!

 

Out of nowhere, a voice right next to us

Appeared

 a man of middle age,

shrewd,

 with a black beard.

 

“Stay calm, hold your boards”

I remember him saying-

 as we held tightly to each other

as the water was swaying,

 

 the lifeboat appeared

and within a few turns,

 landed next to us over waves

coming into our space of uncertainty.

 

Clambering aboard

 the sea consuming us,

 sucking us in as if we were noodles .

Heaving onto human hands and warm flesh.

 

Suddenly:

towards the coast,

 boats streaming,

hundreds staring

shallow calm.

 

Off. Sand.

 handshakes, heartbeat racing, muscles

 shaking, cold bodies shivering,

talking. Back onto the beach.

 

Away from the predacious claws of the sea.

Published: 08 Jan 2026 19:31 Last updated: 08 Jan 2026 19:39 14 views
 
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